Post 11: Redemption?

Today, I continued to watch some Atomic Learning videos but they got to doing stuff that is not necessary for me to know, so I switched to writing. I added a few simple scenes that I think really enhance the script. I added a bit more of a fight between Nate and John. This makes their interaction at the end make more sense. I also added more of Isabelle after she is added into the comics. How did I do this? Why, there is no other way than... ANOTHER MONTAGE!! YEAH! Rather than switching situations though, it is just them traveling, and Isabelle and Evan forming a relationship. I think that both of these small changes make the biggest differences I could and wanted to make with this script. I am also debating on the filming process. I am wondering if I should ask C.J. Gross and Justin Haugesag to do some camera work for the movie, because I would like to film with two different camera angles and I think this is the best way to do so. I may want them for certain scenes. Hmm.