Post 8: The Return of the Thing

I handed in my script and got the feedback. Basically, I need to add more connection between the characters after Belle joins the group. I feel that it jumps too quickly. I also need to clarify that Evan does NOT kill himself. He dies of pancreatic cancer. And according to Boeser, the most important thing I need to do is to find a point to this whole movie. Obviously, at this point, I'm past the point of no return. So I need to rewrite like Speedy Gonzalez (the speed part, not the Gonzalez part) and I need to make this worthwhile. I've emailed Jack Collis about asking around and seeing if anyone is interested in helping me out with the drawing. Perhaps I will go speak with him sometime during the day. Anyway. First I will fix the minor errors and then get to work on making it... decent. I'm working on it.